Tuesday, January 20, 2009
~ 7:19 PM ~
Okay, I did the unspeakable. I updated today. Yeah, I wasn't supposed to. I'm supposed to update on Fridays every OTHER week, in other words, every two weeks. I was going to update this Friday, but me being me, I updated today. SO...Here's the next chapter's sneak peek:
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“Just go, okay? I’ve already told you. I don’t like you, never did. You were just someone I thought might be funny to play around with. I played you, can you not understand? I never liked you. I messed with your feelings. Your heart. All the things I said to you, that I loved you, all were lies. DO YOU UNDERSTAND!?!” I screamed, my voice quaking.
“No, you do love me.”
I laughed bitterly. “Look at you. What makes you think I would like you? Out of all people, you? You’re a JOKE, for god’s sake! Stop dreaming. I never and NEVER will like you!”
He jumped off the motorcycle with the helmet still in his hand.
“Look, this is for you.” He put the helmet on my head. “Look how cute you look.” In the distance, I heard the car approaching. ‘I need to get rid of him, fast.’ I thought desperately.
“You are pathetic, Arron. Really pathetic. You make me want to puke!” I snatched the helmet off my head. “What part of goodbye do you NOT understand!?!” I screeched, holding back the tears that were threatening to spill out. I flung the helmet back at him in which he caught expertly in his hands. I took advantage of the distraction and ran for the car. Hearing thudding footsteps behind me, I knew he was pursuing me. Knowing that I wouldn’t make it in time, I turned to him.
“Arron, if you really love me, let me go. If we are destined to be together, we will meet again. Until then, this is goodbye.” I got into the car and the driver drove off, leaving Arron behind.
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Wow...that's a big portion of the chapter. Enjoy guys! ^_^
Tuesday, January 13, 2009
~ 8:21 PM ~
Dear beloved readers,
I am back with another sneak peek of Han vs Hebe. I have decided to update once every 2 weeks now. So every other Friday I would post unless I'm really sick or on vacation. Please don't hate me or refuse to read my stories. Without your support, I might feel neglected and unhappy and therefore would not update my stories.
By the way, I came up with an amazing plot for my new story. It is totally fictional and it would be a murder mystery novel. I plan on making it into a series. ^_^ But I want to finish it first before I post it. I probably would want to finish Dead End before I start that story. Hmmm...anyways, enough with me talking. Here's the teaser:
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"Yeah, she is." His friend next to him said. "This is exactly like the movie Secret. You know, the one where Jay Chou stars in? When he had this piano challenge with the Piano Prince of the school. This is exactly the same. Except they are girls instead of guys and they are playing drums instead of the piano. This is psychic!" Arron leaned forward.
"She could play the piano just as well." He said to the boys. They turned back to him.
"No way!" They said in disbelief.
"Yes way. She's an amazing musician!" The boys dropped their jaws.
"Are you friends with her?" One of them asked.
"More than friends. I'm her best friend." Arron replied.
"Here, can you give her this?" He handed a slip of paper to Arron. "My name is Xiu."
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Oooh...someone's interested in Han. Hmm...what's going on? ^_^ Haha...who' s the new guy? Please leave comments!
Wednesday, January 7, 2009
~ 5:46 PM ~
Dear beloved readers,
I'm back with another mean teaser. ^_^I've been kind of busy. And sick so I haven't been updating a lot. But I will update at least twice every two weeks. So yup, please stick with me! ^_^ Here it is:
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"Jiro!" The bourgeoisie whirled around in shock. There lay Jiro, motionless, on the ground with Selina crouching over him. Blood spilled from an open wound on his chest. "Don't leave me!"
Arron stared and stared. His best friend laid there. He had no clue whether or not he was alive or dead. The gun barrel pointed at Jiro started to lift. Connected to the barrel was a hand and that hand led to him. Arron's eyes grew cold and hard.
"You just killed my best friend. My best friend in the whole world!" Arron screamed. The other boy just smirked.
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Comment please! Love you all! ^_^
-Gou Gou
www.sweet-lemon.co.nr
Friday, January 2, 2009
~ 5:08 PM ~
Dear beloved readers,
It seems that my new story: Han vs Hebe is more popular than my old story. Oh well, Dead End WAS my first fanfic I've written. So it's bound to be kind of bad. But I've already received some comments and all I've posted is the first chapter. So here's a sneak peek/teaser for the next chapter. Please comment! ^_^ I'd appreciate it!
BTW, have you heard Fahrenheit's new song? Ji Mo Bao Zou? It's so good! I'm in love with it. ^_^ Anyways, enough of me talking, let's see the chapter.
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"Excuse me?" a haughty voice interrupted my thoughts. I looked up. A pretty brunette girl looked down on me.
"Yes?" I replied.
"That's my seat." She told me snobbily.
"Oh yeah? I don't see your name on it." I told her carelessly. Her jaw dropped. 'Oh, score one for Han!'
"You-You are going to get it." She huffed. "What's your name? I want to meet you in the auditorium after school today. I'm going to show you."
"Han." I replied. "What's the challenge?"
"Drums. I challenge you to a drumming challenge."
I smirked. Drums? She's got to be kidding. Drumming? That was the best instrument I played, the one I was best at. I'd been drumming since the age of 5. "You're on." I told her.
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So what do you think? Please comment and continue to support my story! I haven't decided who should win yet. I like both Han and Hebe. So far, only one reader supported Han. The others rooted for Hebe. I could make two endings. One Bebu, the other ...(what should I do for Arron and Han? HYan? Perhaps. ^_^)
Here's some questions for my readers:
1) Who should win? Or should I have separate endings, i.e. one on Bebu, and one on HYan?
2) How should I address Han and Arron? Arron and Hebe are already Bebu. What about HYan? (H represents Han, Y represents Yan, and an is what is the ending of their names.)
With love,
Gou Gou
